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Hey there, Persephoneia! Nice user name, by the way. ^__^ Heart shaped river rocks -- I brought them home just for you , But they dried and dulled And their ...

Hey there, Emalily! Welcome to YWS, by the way. It's nice to see you're already finding your way around. Anyways, on the subject of these lyrics, I thought you did ...

Melanie Hart: "So...what are we going to do then?" Deano asked, leaning against the side of one of the cabins. I grinned, "I don't know why you all sound so ...

Captain Clare Davies: So he hadn't noticed - or he hadn't come to her. Clare sighed. What had she expected, really? She knew Turtle would have never come to find ...

Hey there, Morgan! On the contrary, I didn't find this depressing. I probably should have - but I didn't, due to the way you wrote this piece. You see, to ...

Um, I'm published... Sounds cool! Being published is great, eh? So, are you a published poet or do you have a book published? I must know. xD. Well, it was ...

6/10. It's cool.

Hmm. I agree with Bolt - having to pay to post a new Storybook could actually improve the quality of existing storybooks because storybookers would commit more time to individual ...

Sounds good - I like that the 2:1 ratio is back in use; I sort of missed it. And the Review Checklist seems pretty cool, though I haven't a chance ...

Hey there, GagaBowie! Like a rotting corpse in the Earth, There is little i can do. You need to capitalize your i's. A vicious disease, it cleans me free of ...

Hi there, GagaBowie! Utterly two minds imprisoned by one another. Hmm. I don't like the way this is phrased - maybe it would be better off as "Two minds utterly ...

Melanie Hart: The tug in the back of my mind was growing stronger - but now wasn't the time I wanted to find the ghost that had been calling me ...

Captain Clare Davies: The Calypso's famed Captain did not sleep that night. At all. Nor did she lie down - no, Clare Davies merely sat on the edge of her ...

There would be no point in joining, Lynette - this storybook is and has been dead since the eighteenth of June.

Melanie Hart: As I saw it, camp would have been much better off without that pudgy, non-stop talker that was apparently our camp supervisor - or something to that affect; ...