MizzElizabeth

Love

Here on my vanity are perfumes unsprayed, lipsticks dried and crumbled like dirt. A mirror so tinted with years of dust, so spotted with bright colorful kisses: A rosy red ...

school

Hehe! Yes, the moon. *waves to the moon* Goodbye. *waves to the sun* Hello. :D

They've already given you all the critty and stuff, and I agree with kitty15 that you should probably expand your description. We can't visualize the scene that well, I can't ...