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see if this clears up some of your questions... i have not edited this chapter yet because i just finished it... Animans I sat on the bridge watching the fish ...

the twigs snapping behind the character is not from that character its from the thing thats following them. and i have not shown a specific gender because it gives away ...

i have made the changes you suggested. and this isnt the whole story its just introducing it. i was told earlier that this is a prologue not a preface which ...