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Re: Hunter
It was an interesting story... but you could of but a bit more detail into it you never said what type of hunter he was? Or what his pray was? ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Secrets
It is a good story, but.... you could put a bit more feeling into it. And the beginning is not very good you should look at it again. But it's ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hey, I'm a newbie 8) Any advice you can give me, Let me know. :)
Aug 15, 2011