MissSarahElizabeth

This song has the same tune and chords as "Waltz for a Night" by Julie Delpy. The lyrics however, are original. A Dream for You I close my eyes and ...

What morals have I? What values do I keep? Betrayal of ourselves and mind- can I be healed while I weep? I look into the horizon and I see nothing ...

It thought this a very thoughtful piece. I liked it. However, some words could be a bit more descriptive and just an overall better choice in language. This was also ...

Good job. I really liked this. You have great images which jump out and grab you. :) A couple of things though: You say "sings" where it almost seems as ...

I am playing a game that you made for me. It is long and strenuous, but there is a prize I see. This game is of waiting, and for you ...

To love and to hate. The words caress each other, intertwining in connection. A bond as one. Vibrations shake them until they collapse in a heap of contradictions. The "it's ...

I liked it, but what did you end up failing to see? You never say it. You also use the word "see" twice. It had great rhythm though, and I ...

Don't cry leatherneck for I can feel your pain. I am in the field of battle surrounded by the weak, the insane. Don't look away leatherneck for there is not ...

Bittersweet wind, crisp stinging my face numb to the watery tears freezing on my rosy cheek. A step on cracked ice with a pother of snow around my bodice. I ...