MissRoronoaZoro

Hello! I am here to write a review. A couple of things: The rhythm is good and I like the idea, but you can make it even better. The descriptive ...

I like the idea of your poem, but I have a couple of critiques/questions. Where is this set? The city or a rural area? You first say: "on the noxious ...

This is a really nice poem. I really hope and wish that a world like this does exist. If only we could forget ourselves and travel to such a world. ...