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Re: Conforming
OK, so I'm getting a bit fed up with people taking the mick of me because I use YWS, so I wrote this poem about conforming. It's pretty accurate until ...
Nov 12, 2009 -
Re: hello everyone!
Hi! I'm Mia, and I know what it's like to be new in the big, shiny world of YWS! PM me if you need any help: I swear I don't ...
Nov 12, 2009 -
Re: You'll Want To Read This
Hi! I'm Mia, and I totally agree with your views on the world! Only one little nit-pick! When first our eyes in this world, I believe that’s the one untainted ...
Nov 12, 2009 -
Re: no athiests in foxholes
Hey! OK, so the first thing I noticed about your poem was the title. In particular, the word "atheist" Which is spelt "athEIst" Aside from that, the poem flowed really ...
Nov 12, 2009 -
Re: MissMiaFacinelli's Review Book
xLogan ->> DONE!
Nov 11, 2009 -
Re: My Experience in the House *Updated x2*
Hi! I'm Mia, and here is the other review! OK, I don't really like horror movies/TV shows/books, and this was no different. I'm not saying it's bad, I just didn't ...
Nov 11, 2009 -
Re: Taking Over.
Hi, I'm Mia, and here is the review! OK, so, overall, a pretty great opening. I was intrigued as to where it was going: the twist was that although I ...
Nov 11, 2009 -
Re: 22
Hi! I'm Mia, and I will be your reviewer today! OK, so I really liked the content of this poem, it had good rhythm and it flowed nicely. But you ...
Nov 11, 2009 -
Re: My YWS GIF
OK. So I got fed up with everyone in my class taking the mickey out of me, so I made this GIF. I hope you take time to watch it ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Luminescence: Part Eight (Read Below) - A Twilight Fanfic
Hey fans! So, I need an opinion... Should I write a special Christmas piece for, well, Christmas? It would be entitled "Black Ice" with a slightly obvious topic, and it ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Obamacratic Win
Hi! I'm Mia, welcome to YWS! OK, I wasn't sure quite what to expect when I clicked on your poem. However, I was pleasantly surprised! This is a very good ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Sunday Solitude
Hi! I'm Mia, welcome to YWS! First off, I really liked this poem. There were a coyple of litttle nit-picks I spotted, however, and here they are! As we end ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: MissMiaFacinelli's Review Book
Anyone want a review? I don't bite, and I'm getting a little bored! The entertainment value of thumb-twiddling has worn off! Mia x
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: A Riddle
Wow! This was such an awesome piece! Rhyme scheme: check! Cool language: check! Grammar: great! Punctuation: ah. This is where the poem falls down a little. There is no punctuation ...
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: A Grand Bouquet
OK! Welcome to YWS! Now, when I clicked on your poem, I expected some Pride-and-Prejudice type Edwardian flowery poem about a ball or dance. What I got was a poem ...
Nov 9, 2009
