MissMiaFacinelli

This is a little (well, long) something I wrote whilst on vacation this year. I was inspired by Twilight!! I hope you like it x ***************************** Carefully, as carefully as ...

PLEASE CAN SOMEONE WRITE A REVIEW OF THIS ?

Thanks for your comment. I now always use punctuation in my poems, if you don't believe me have a look at my "Friends and Enemies" poem! (find it here: I ...

Please read this poem and critique it. Is it better than my last poem?

In the beginning, there were three, Sophia, Louisa, and then me. Sophia, The cool one, my best friend. She drove Louisa round then bend. Louisa, Rich, pretty, spoiled, With a ...

Please keep critique-ing my work! It is all much appreciated!

Aw, cute. :) Crit now, thoughts later, yes? There are these two things called Alliteration and Assonance, and they're what give a poem a poetic feel. They're really awesome, and ...

Seriously, what is your problem? Twilight has made so many people happy Breaking Dawn isn't even THAT bad There are no sex scenes, just "the morning after" If you hate ...

Please, I need some more replies to this!

Why do people always end with "Keep writing?" LOL! Thanks for all your comments guys. And it's meant to be "at me" because when someone talks TO you they "connect" ...

Thanks! =] I take it you like Twilight???? And I know what you mean about those lines they are very long.and I get what everyone is saying about the punctuation.

Thanks, sorry I don't mean to be harsh, it's just all my friends thought it was good. And thanks for understanding it's not meant to rhyme.

It's not meant to rhyme!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And it makes no sense with all the commas. And all the people I know who read it said they loved it. If you read ...

I have been asked several times if I actually wrote this, and the answer is yes, I did. Edward Cullen You sit with me at night Hold me safe inside ...

Love is the spring that never runs dry, Even when it's burning. OK.... This kinda doesn't make sense, as "spring" usually means a stream of water, and water doesn't burn!!! ...