MissMiaFacinelli

Hey! OK, I love your poem! It flows so beautifully! But there is just one little thing! Punctuation. Remember a line break isn't a pause, but a comma is. Some ...

OK Firstly, I love your poem. It so totally reminds me of me. I wish I could find the cool, confident person I see behind the looking glass! I like ...

Wow! I love how this progresses - it's cute ^^ Let me know how it goes with Mr Starbucks! Keep writing, I like your style! Pgsgirl x

Here you go! Sorry it's been a while x Still unedited... once all parts are up on YWS, I will edit. Promise x ********************************* As soon as we were outside, ...

Wow. So, this reminds me a lot of my last story, in which the main character feels intense physical and emotional pain after the love of her life leaves without ...

Wow. I love this poem! It's so... raw, and sort of delicate too. The "drifting first letter" is a kind of bug I've noticed in the Poetry Forums, but it's ...

Whoa. This is pretty gritty stuff. I hope your friend is OK x Pgsgirl x

OK So I love your style... it's totally me! It's intrinsically good, but don't overdo the ellipses, it's a little melodramatic and confusing. Apart from that, it's great! Keep writing! ...

A mouth Is a slingshot, stretching To the point when the stone Flings. My head bears the marks of these Rocks thrown. OK So the first time I read this, ...

WOW! I loved this poem!! The essence is fabulous, but I agree with the others... a spellchecker would be a good idea Keep writing - I like your style! Pgsgirl ...

OK So this is a good poem, but I agree with Galerius - the "even" at the start of line 2 is unnecessary - no-one is surprised by the fact ...

He is there for me And I for him He likes me I like him. We have alot in common So we know how to make Each other laugh And ...

Hey! Could you possibly review and critique my story? It's a fanfiction, but I think you'll like it. When you're done, maybe you could do Part Two? I will send ...

Part Two YAY ********************************** You would think that it would a while, at least, to find Mr Right. It didn’t, because I found him the second I opened the front ...

Great job, Nate - the new YWS rocks! Just a couple of questions though ^^ 1 - On "My Settings" every time I try to change ANYTHING it says "The ...