MissMiaFacinelli

OK. So, my initial thought was that this is a really great poem. Lots of great descriptors, lots of cool metaphors. However, on my second read through I picked up ...

Wow. This was a really awesome poem. Your choice of language really made me think, and I don't think the fact you didn't have a rhyme scheme affected your poem ...

Oh. My. Giddy. Gosh. I loved this npoem - it was incredibly moving. Although simplistic, you managed to convey a real sense of raw emotion. There's just one thing you ...

Well, here it is! Part six of my baby! ******************************** When I arrived back at the house, it was late at night. All the lights were out, and although I ...

WOW. A brilliant poem! I have just started studying Romeo and Juliet, and this totally reminds me of it! However, just one little thing to work on - punctuation. Make ...

OK. I really liked this song, it's a good topic to pick - I know how hard it is trying to write when you're not in the mood! However, I'm ...

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Long awaited!!! I hope you like this - it got a bit weird, so I apologise in advance. *********************************** * * * I regained consciousness below ground. I knew where ...

Wow! OK, thanks Demi, I will try to work on that, but I have just started back at school so it's a little hectic at the moment!! Please keep all ...

Firstly... Good job!! I really liked this song!! It has a good rhyming pattern as it is not AABB, like some other songs. However, there should be more obvious gaps ...

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Firstly, welcome to YWS!! OK Although I don't get this poem,it flows pretty OK. Just one thing. Punctuation! Remember a line break is not a pause, but a comma is. ...

Wow. I love this poem - the way you have managed to express such a powerful sense of protection is a few short lines is incredible. I must admit, when ...

OK I like this poem, and totally agree with the point of view of being on the outside looking in. This is really rather like my current story (it's complicated) ...

OK So here it is!! Part four (of seven) ****************************************** At first, she couldn’t figure out where I was, as I wasn’t on the bed, and surely a vampire would ...