MissMiaFacinelli

I don't know, wouldn't it be difficult to get to Teletubby land?

Here it is! The long awaited, much anticipated Part Seven! This one is dedicated to the wonderful AlphaGirl01, for being a loyal fan ********************************** As I moved over to the ...

"the purr of a porsche enginge" Enginge is spelled engine OK. Thanks for the crit, but I think you'll find that I spelt "engine" correctly and that you changed it ...

Wow. This is a really cool poem - great job!! Just one little thing - punctuation. Make sure you add a comma at the end of each line, to give ...

Wow. I really loved this piece!! It cracked me up so badly!! It's been so long since I read Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone, I can barely remember it, ...

Wow. This is a really awesome, poignant poem! Just make sure that you punctuate the end of every line, to give your readers a chance to breathe! Try reading it ...

OK. I wasn't entirely sure what this was about until I got a couple of paragraphs in. It was grammatically correct, but a little repetitive. It reminds me a lot ...

Wow. I really liked your photos! You have a awesome style! Just a couple of things that my - limited - photographic side told me! "Old Lamp" was excellent - ...

Wow. I don't even like soccer that much - we call it football where I'm from - but this article was cool! It sounded really pro, great job! The formatting ...

Wow! I really liked this piece - it was totally my style!! I HATE being called Elizabeth - it drives me insane, but I will put up with it from ...

I was wondering... What's the point in the Points System if we have the review ratio too?? I was happy with the R.R. and then I saw the points and ...

Well, I really liked this poem, but it looked a bit intimidating to me - three huge chunks of writing! :? Just one little point to pick up on - ...

OK. All in all, a good poem, but there's just one little thing! Make sure you capitalise the start of each line, unless the non-capitalisation is intentional, in which case ...

Wow. This was a really cool poem - I liked it a lot. Just one little thing - make sure you punctuate the end of each line to let your ...

Wow. I really liked the flow of this poem, and the topic - it was awesome. I can't find many faults, but make sure you capitalise the first letter of ...