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Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 4 *
Wow, in such a short amount of chapters, the pace of the story is quickened at a considerably fast rate, though we, as the readers know very little about what ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 3 *
Wow, that was a little on the intense side: love it! The story is most definitely getting better and better! You're giving us very little as you seem to be ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 1 *
Well, you're certainly off to a good start with your story, my friend. I love how you've made it realistic and the anticipation of Toby's heart pain is very well-written. ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: The Return of Magic Part One Chapter One: The Snow Sisters
Greetings, TheFantasy14! So far, your story sounds rather interesting, I'm actually looking forward to seeing where the story will take us. Your two main characters, Ingred and Iris, are very ...
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: The Golden Gate of Gireswen: Chapter 1
Hi there! This is my first review, so if it's not that good, I apologise in advance. I am quite a fan of fantasy stories, and I think I may ...
Sep 21, 2015