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Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 1.2
Person definition : a human being regarded as an individual. Human is the race, person I guess is a term used with the race to describe itself? Maybe? But 'person' ...
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Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 1.3
I don't think the nuts and bolts of it need to be explained I just don't exactly know why it is there and what it is used for. is it ...
Apr 18, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 47
Hello! Seb's death has definitely left a giant hole behind :( Poor Alexander, I just want to give him a hug! To become a vampire in this you have to ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 46
Hello! I wanted my readers to be just as shocked as Alexander so from your reaction I think I succeeded! It would have been amazing if Alexander and Seb had ...
Mar 12, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 45
Hello! Yes, Joe's back and he does have an important part to play. Nico is so horrible to him seeing as he used to be somewhat of a friend when ...
Mar 9, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 3
Hello again! 1. The guy mentioning that he thinks she's awake indicates that she had not been awake previous - meaning she was unconscious. So if she wasn't awake before ...
Mar 2, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny : Chapter 2
Howdy again! 4. Evie is hurt by how Michael acts around her, 'She swallowed a lump in her throat, squashing down her hurt', she tries to be over friendly to ...
Feb 28, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 1 (Revised)
Hello again! I have changed this chapter a lot since it has been put on here and I didn't republish because I didn't expect to have new readers. But a ...
Feb 28, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 43
Okay that's fine, as long as you are not just disregarding characters because they are similar to others you have read because it is very hard to find a completely ...
Feb 28, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 43
He only dislikes her because she liked Nico and it pisses him off.
Feb 28, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 44
Hello! Thanks for your pointers, I will take them under consideration. Alexander's mentioned Joe's eye colour is because he is very perceptive and is a massive flirt so it makes ...
Feb 27, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 44
Can I just say that I love your avatar? Dean>Sam always. I'm glad this was an enjoyable read for you even though it is out of context. Thanks for stopping ...
Feb 27, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 44
Hello there! I do need to cut down my chapters, they look a lot longer in this format! I did cut the chapters in half way back but have stopped ...
Feb 27, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 44
You're still reading on! I am loving this! Have I got you hooked? ;) 2. Because they have all been vampires for so long and have lived off nothing but ...
Feb 27, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 43
Hello again again! I'm glad you like the romance, aren't they just adorable?! Above, BlueAfrica has just said how much she loves Daisy so again, it's so interesting to see ...
Feb 27, 2017
