MissGangamash

Hello! I'm glad you like the dream sequence, some people don't like dreams in novels but I think they're necessary for Alexander's character. He didn't had dreams while he had ...

Hello! Alexander and Varsee are vampire siblings, meaning they have the same Maker. They are not blood relatives. And they bath together the same way a couple would... So yeah, ...

Hello! I'm glad you know it was Daisy, maybe you subconsciously knew that they had a connection? She is sort of the first person and the last person you would ...

Hello! Yes, it is a very dark tense time in the farmhouse at the start of this chapter, silent but not. I think it's the 'Once' that is confusing, I've ...

Hello! Yes my chapters are veeerrryyy long but that's because I've only got one reader who has read from start to finish (Kal) and for the last 10-15 or so ...

Yeah, I can't help you with space stuff. I just know from recently watching Passengers that contacting Earth from another galaxy is extreeemmmeeeeellllly difficult.

Ah yes, you mentioned that they are thousands of light years away from the humans, and a light year is 10,000 Earth years so its actually physically impossible for the ...

I don't know much about space travel and stuff so I don't really know how it would work. It depends how far away from Earth they are, I think. I ...

Nico isn't really a bad guy and I wanted people to see that. Readers were commenting at the start saying that he wasn't threatening and villainous enough but... he's just ...

I don't think the funeral scene needs to be extended. We've only known the character for two chapters so he doesn't need a massive send off, I don't think. Maybe ...

I've just scan read the previous chapter again and maybe where it says, And Treego will fix this. There%u2019s some weird fly things stuck in the pipes that are throwing ...

Your version of humans in this are a lot nicer than the humans in the real world, haha. Animals and incest's are sentient beings and we kill them all the ...

Sorry! Now that I've read on I realise that it is all linked.

Ahhh okay, I thought the problem that McCaw was dealing with the flies was the same problem with that's going on with the temperature. It's just a little confusing having ...

The conversation is still sort of the same if it ends with him saying he just wanted to show his face. It's that bit that doesn't link to the previous ...