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Re: The Progeny: Chapter 44
Hello again! You're doing well! Alexander finally snapped! It was building up. Nico is left speechless because he knows that he is right. He's fighting a losing battle. Yeah, Joe ...
Jul 12, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 43
I'm so glad its clear that Alexander is suffering for PTSD. His past is catching up on him and its not a pretty sight - I love writing psychological disorders ...
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Re: The Progeny: Chapter 41
Don't have to do it straight away and you can even just copy and paste what you put on the last chapter on here haha. Will only take 2 mins ...
Jul 11, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 42
This is one of my favourite chapters. Its the one where it is clear what the Cure has done to Alexander. He is breaking. Every time I read it I ...
Jul 11, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 41
The length of the chapters now are as long as they are in book form - I have self published it now on Amazon! It looks sooooo good, not to ...
Jul 11, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 40
Hello and welcome back! Hope you remember what's been happening haha. Most of the Cured aren't really important and are just really introduced to show who they are and how ...
Jul 11, 2017 -
Re: Unnatural Enemies: Part 1
It says 'I cannot see due to the light' straight after. Perhaps you missed it.
Jul 11, 2017 -
Re: Unnatural Enemies: Part 1
Thank you for taking the time to read and review! I'll have a look over your suggestions when I'm editing :) Some of your nitpicks were just the English spellings ...
Jul 11, 2017 -
Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 1
Hello! I know there's not much description but it's difficult to describe everything but also keep the pace, so I just focused on describing what was needed, like the sprites. ...
Jun 28, 2017 -
Re: Wonders Lost: Prologue
Awh, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it and I hope I've intrigued you enough to read on!
Jun 28, 2017 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 4.3
Okay coolio %uD83D%uDE0A
Jun 11, 2017 -
Re: Wonders Lost: Prologue
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! I'll look over the points you've mentioned when editing :D
Jun 5, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Epilogue
And a bit of Caius, too ;) hehe I will check out your story tomorrow! :D
May 29, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Epilogue
Hello! I did take a big break between uploading this so it has been hovering on this site for quite a while XD There isn't going to be a sequel. ...
May 29, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Epilogue
I'm so glad you read till the end. Thank you so much for being such a loyal reader
May 29, 2017
