MissGangamash

Hello! The reason I'm reiterating what has happened to Tamara is because that is all Meg can think about. Her best friend was snatched away and is presumed dead so ...

Hello! The spelling mistake is just because I'm using the English way of spelling rather than the American way. We use 's' instead of 'z'. I do indent paragraphs but ...

Hello! Because Jorge can make portals to different places, he spends most of his time out of the shop. The only time Xena and Jorge would ever really accidentally bump ...

Hello! Jorge's feelings towards Xena are supposed to be all over the place but I'll be having a look over when I edit. He has no idea what to make ...

Hello! Tom and Danny were both once human. Danny was taken as a child on a family camping trip and never heard of again - here you find he'd been ...

Hello! Jorge doesn't like being vulnerable. At all! And he does get stared at a lot but more in a fearful way so for her to assess him so openly ...

Hello! I'm so glad my point was put across well enough that you caught it. Phew! I'm still a newbie to poetry so I'm really glad you like my attempt. ...

Hello again! Haha, killing children is fine but Jorge draws the line at cannibalism. Meg doesn't know it was Jorge who took her friends. She's just reacting to an intimidating ...

Hi! The poem is actually about feeling nothing at a funeral but thinking that you should be. 'Grief adjacent' meaning the narrator isn't grieving but it sort of feeling something ...

Hello! Thanks for taking the time to read :) I'm terribly at editing my own work, it takes me a few goes to catch all the typos. The part about ...

Yes, more characters! I've introduced all the main characters now so you can relax haha. The part about Xena and her being tied down is supposed to be ambiguous. I ...

Totally forgot I had a review on this so sorry for the late reply! Thank you for your in depth review, I'll look into what you've pointed out. And I'd ...

Hello! My favourite types of characters to write/read about are antiheros and just general not nice characters who you kinda get a soft spot for anyway - so I'm glad ...

I was at work reading this review and actually openly giggled. Your reaction to Jorge is just what I was hoping for after adding the prologue XD It has totally ...

Ahoy again! Fancy meeting you here... This is the full paragraph about the screams: 'Then she heard a scream. In her panic, her lantern fell to the ground. More screams ...