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Re: The Rage (Chapter 1)
Thank you! I try to do my own spin on the vampire genre. I love stories where supernatural beings are living mundane lives haha. The part was separated in the ...
Jul 14, 2020 -
Re: Wonder's Lost: Chapter 12 part 2
I've changed nipple in my word doc haha. Thanks for the review!
Feb 3, 2019 -
Re: Wonder's Lost: Chapter 12 part 2
Thank you for the review! I've altered what you've suggested in my word doc version :D I do usually put a line when I start a different POV but must ...
Feb 3, 2019 -
Re: Wonder's Lost: Chapter 12 part 1
A lot of Xena's parts are her alone so a lot of the stuff from her POV is her thoughts. Her character is very much thought based - with having ...
Nov 23, 2018 -
Re: Wonder's Lost: Chapter 12 part 1
Thank you for reviewing! (Sorry it took so long to reply)
Nov 23, 2018 -
Re: Wonder's Lost: Chapter 12 part 1
Sorry it's been so long since you commented for me to reply but uni stuff kinda has put this on the back burner. I know some people hate 'info-dumps' but ...
Nov 23, 2018 -
Re: Wonder's Lost: Chapter 12 part 1
Sorry it's been so long since you commented for me to reply but uni stuff kinda has put this on the back burner. Anyway, thank you for taking the time ...
Nov 23, 2018 -
Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 11
Xena has been in the relationship a lot longer than Jorge has. She has known about his existence and has been following him and keeping a check on him for ...
Sep 28, 2018 -
Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 11
Hello! I don't know if you've read from the start but Xena... is not like normal people. So yes, mindlessly cutting into someone else's skin is bizarre but it is ...
Sep 28, 2018 -
Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 10
Thanks for the comment! I know that action scenes are my weak spot so I%u2019ll definitely be going over this novel and switching things up a bit :)
Jul 28, 2018 -
Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 10
Hi! I see what you mean about all your comments. I wrote this chapter when I still didn't really know what I was doing with the story but I've finished ...
Jul 4, 2018 -
Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 9
From your comments it just sounded like you only read this chapter so I was explaining what you%u2019ve missed beforehand, I appreciate every read and review but if you don%u2019t ...
Jun 23, 2018 -
Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 1
Meg is just a scared little girl. She hardly ever goes out so she's a little naive. Thanks for the review!
Jun 21, 2018 -
Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 9
Hello! Sorry for the late reply! Three girls were taken by the Imp, but only one of them was Meg's friend. The other two were bullies. Meg knows about the ...
Jun 21, 2018 -
Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 9
Hi! Sorry for the late reply, been crazzzy busy with uni. Anyhooo, I have mindmaps all over my bedroom about this novel and the sequel which I say I'm writing ...
Jun 21, 2018
