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MissDevonshire

  • Script » General, General Re: I wish I wasn’t, I wish I was. I wish it didn’t, I wish it did.

    Sorry for this, posted my review twice by mistake and now I don't know how to delete this message hahah

    Jun 12, 2019
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Curious Female

    I think this poem is really cool. I like how you include daily things such as the hair nevever being in a ponytail. In my opinion this makes it much ...

    May 29, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: Lines from a Lover

    This is so sweet! The chosing of words is on point. Love the narure methaphores a lot. They have this wonderful romantic feel to them without being to abstract, truly ...

    May 19, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Historical Fiction Re: the london plauage

    Fistly I have to say that I so happy that I have found somebody else on this site writing histrorical fiction:) I both love to write and read that genre. ...

    May 9, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: When you look at me

    This is a really sweet poem. It seems like a classic in a way and it is really memorable! The choice or words is perfect and it could defenetely be ...

    May 4, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: I See You Chapter 1

    I think this could become really interesting. You captured my interest right away and you defenetely make me want to read more. I like that you are thrown into the ...

    May 4, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I Hate Cancer

    Wow, this is so touching. As somebody who haven't experienced this myself I can of course never understand it fully. But you have done a very good job making the ...

    May 4, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Denouncing You

    I love this! The language is so beautiful, tragical and romantic at the same time. It has this classic feel to it wich personally find so pretty. Not that it ...

    May 3, 2019


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