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Re: Hannah's Heartbreak
I love the lyrics well written very meaningful and emotional love it good job :)
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: I Love You More
I like the poem . great feeling , well written and good emotion in it :) great job :)
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: If I Must Die
This is a great poem has a great meaning and makes you think about life. I am not good at reviewing mistakes in the poems but i really liked the ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Yesterday
i love that this poem is simple ,beautiful and really has the great emotion in it cause a good friendship is hard to find and once you have lost it ...
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Re: Snow Flakes
nicely written :) and creates a true winter and christmas feeling good job :)
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: this is not a poem about love
This is absolutley a wonderful poem keep up the good work I loved the emotion beautiful .
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Evil of the world
This is very good ...I like it although it truly a bit feels like a heavy metal song :P but a great job anyway
Feb 13, 2009 -
Re: Love came here to stay
:D Hey I like it a lot this is good Cant wait to read your other lyrics in the future :D
Sep 15, 2008 -
Re: Chat room love
Hi,Oh hello How are you? the communication starts now and the stranger from the other corner of the world says: what are you up to today? Wanna find some chat ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: A Quiet Evening in the Rain.
It has so nice meaning and very simple :D well done
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: new hope.
Nicely done I like it and these are my favourite lines :D Winds sweep Waters flow Oranges paint the sunset Love paints the heart
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Rain!
I like it a lot specially these lines: Rain Oh wonderful rain, How I love thee! Sitting in the house all day Watching people on the roads flee. Some people ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Friends!
truly a very good and so true article s So awesome job :D
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Back again
:D well written has really good rhythm in it Spinning around never touching the ground fighting and pushing for more. Fire inside flame burning wide soul and mind are one. ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: home is where the heart is
That`s a wonderful poem It has such a good meaning I know I should be critical too but I`m not very good at it :D Home is where the heart ...
Sep 14, 2008
