Misamiera

Ooh. Intriguing. I skimmed it once, opened the spoiler, and thought, "Sociopath? Interesting!" So I read it again. Guess it's true that when you read something twice, you pick up ...

Aww! I really enjoyed reading your poem. It paints such a nice, vivid picture. Your grandmother must have been so wonderful--I'm sorry she passed away. (At first I read the ...

“Uncle Reuben?” “Hm? Nat, is that you?” Natalie smiled. “It’s me, Uncle.” An man, slouched on a broken couch, turned his weary face towards her. “Aren’t you early? Come closer, ...

One bright Saturday morning, George noticed an oddly shaped sprinkler in his front yard. He didn't remember installing one, and didn't think anyone else would have. Who would install a ...

I like this. I've always liked war stories. Yours kind of reminds me of All Quiet on the Western Front. Did you ever read that? Not a happy book, but ...

Wow! Seriously awesome mushrooms. What's nice is that you've included a lot of nice details and cheery colors. I love that you've also used your imagination on these! I laughed ...

Wow! I really like your story. It's such an interesting concept, and to see someone want differences eliminated to say that even nationality is unnecessary... I think you did a ...

Wow! I was certainly not expecting that ending, but I have to say: that fit in extremely well. It brought the whole piece together. Fantastic! I thought it was great. ...

Wow! Certainly a winner. You're right, there are grammatical/stylistic errors here and there, but the plot is fantastic. It reminds me of the short story "The Yellow Wallpaper," by Charlotte ...

I'm doing Script Frenzy as well this year. Last year I also did it... I had a pretty good plot, but the whole thing sort of fell apart in the ...

Hahaha! That's fantastic! I really love your parody of Twilight... or rather, Twilight fans. I'm not a Twilight fan, and when I first saw that this was Twilight fanfiction, I ...

On Monday , I meet the love of my life. We're in the mall - he's exiting, I'm entering, and he holds the door open for me, like a perfect ...

Hmm... Is this a complete story or the beginning of something? I can't tell. I think you need to work on basic punctuation. There are a lot of sentences that ...

U-Universal.

Hm, dragons. I've always liked stories with dragons. :D First off, you've got some nice names. Good, distinctive names. The dragon's name, Misery, certainly foreshadows something, and intrigues the re