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Mirasol

  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Merry Christmas

    Hi! I like how it paints a beautiful scene in my head and gives me a warm, happy feeling. :) But you might wanna use some of the imagery to ...

    Nov 14, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Falling Asleep

    In a solace of black and white, Nothing moved except the blinds Occasionally letting in moonlight Teasing my sight. Sobs sliced the silence like a blade I cannot put up ...

    Nov 13, 2011


I feel like it will be absolute hotdog water, but oh well. It's just a draft.
— Charm