Mirasol

You are my sky. The one that holds everything together. The one that is always there for me, no matter the weather. The one that I see first thing in ...

Hey! Nice poem. Although the structure is a little inconsistent and I don't know, weird, it's a really good idea. But maybe the structure is your style and it's really ...

Very nice. I like the "Tap.Tap.Tap"s, it stays in my head. :) A really good idea that no one would have thought of because its like writing about not being ...

Fallen snow Envelopes the world In it's ivory embrace; Cold to the human race. My garden, My beautiful garden. Roses, poppies, anything you name. Teemed with life, now gone and ...

Ok, the grammar is a little off at parts and you need to diversify your sentence structure but on the whole, it was a great story. Very engaging. Also, short ...

I loved it! :) It's really nice, good flow and vocabulary and it was easy to understand. Really makes the reader empathize with the speaker. At the end of a ...

Beautiful piece. Very detailed descriptions. You could work more on the rhythm and flow of the poem. I like the unique structure. :) The sacrifice of you may be worthwhile ...

You, that I don't like nor do I recognize, are stuck with me forever. Why? You, that are not pretty and cool like the other people in school, are stuck ...

Really clever of you to use soup as a metaphor to describe the universe in Space. :) It's poetically fancy and quirky at the same time but yet it flows ...

Gliding slow and fast. Staying; forever may you last. Spraying the sky gray. Falling onto the world. Covering it with a frosted glass pane. Giving me a glass bead curtain. ...

Amazing piece of work. It shouldn't be "manga" though, because it's not like the mainstream japanese stuff. Don't take that negatively, I meant to say that it's really unique, the ...

Your sister is really cute and she's appealing in a way that is not childish at all! Very unique element! The photos are all really nice, excellent job for a ...

The word choice is really precise and great. Beautiful poem. Totally love it. A single flickering flame casts screaming shadows from my past. This is my favourite line. A very ...

Bursts of loud. Some long, some short. Murmured responses. Some heard, some not. Like sharp spears, they impale my ears. Piercing my heart with fear with every second that draws ...

Ok, nice poem, easy to understand. You might wanna use more poetic devices like metaphors or similies, imagery. The idea was there though, and as you write more and more ...