Mirasol

didnt juliet stab herself?

The pouring rain, the thunder claps; the numbing pain, the shackles clasps. My perseverance is wearing thin. The rain is soaking through to my skin. My eyelids heavy as the ...

Stepping into the shower, into my haven into a trance-like state. Stepping out of the hall, out of the world, out of my exhausted self. I command the water to ...

Hi there! A nice, neat poem. Really detailed descriptions with a great choice of words. But it's a little ironic and confusing how you loved him so much but you ...

To my Superstar: Show Luo Zhi Xiang When you look What do you see? All I see is you looking at me. Those shining stars you have for eyes; I ...

Wow...really strong poem. Well, I'd expect nothing less when the title reads "Tears of This Tiger" :) I love the title, by the way, really great use of alliteration. Your ...

Nice. :) haha really fun! I'll try it sometime...maybe then I'll write a poem about it. haha.

On Monday You avoided my gaze. Pushed me away. Left me in a daze. On Tuesday you hovered around close. Gave me a smile. Even said "Hello." A winding stream ...

I like the idea but you could maybe elaborate more on the idea of bullying instead of spinning more and more horrible punishments for the bully. But maybe you just ...

Nice, though I can't quite understand much of it. It's about watching your child grow up, right? Don’t think That her spark will kindle nothing. Now She looks up at ...

The first few looked really professional as you can see the difference between foreground and background. (The background was blurred.) The rest are also good but are more like the ...

It feels great to finally bloom; to raise your head to the sun; the stars and moon. Fate comes along says you can't be happy too long, strikes you with ...

I really love it! I've felt it before and yours is the best description I've ever seen! Thinking back, I feel really happy now. And you know what? I'm reading ...

Wow....this is really great. really deep. Though I can't understand some parts of it. as two finite masks, printed over porcelain This is my favourite line. :) it's such a ...

I really agree and I really love it. This is such a common phenomena but no one has ever described it better than you. Oh what a pretty smile on ...