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Re: [removed]
Hello, The piece painted a great picture in my mind, It was as though I was standing in your shoes. I like the way you described everything in a limited ...
Dec 20, 2009 -
Re: 21st Century
Hello Sam, Thank you for the review :D , The "which" was a typo, excuse me :P
Dec 16, 2009 -
Re: Last Ride
She has her head against the wall her hands dropped onto the floor as though they were out of power and her body nonchalantly put all its weight towards the ...
Dec 15, 2009 -
Re: 21st Century
Death has become a common thing on the streets today People broadcasting it, like it was their name Days come by, Someone says I lost a friend And it goes ...
Dec 14, 2009 -
Re: Church property
The photos with the leave-less trees are the ones that caught my eye instantly, not that its uncommon to see such trees but how they are part of the photo ...
Dec 14, 2009 -
Re: For You
A little repetitive with the "shine" though this poem was the most that reached out to me today. It drew a greatly detailed image in my head of what you ...
Dec 14, 2009 -
Re: A secret
It amuses me how some people can be heartless and how some people can be worthless and how some people can change your life by a song When you ask ...
Dec 14, 2009 -
Re: I remember
This is pretty emotional, the description drew a good image in my head and it felt like i was in your shoes. I like the use of the galaxy and ...
Dec 14, 2009 -
Re: Someday
I like long highways Maybe highways with no end In my head there is a painting Painted so beautifully Of dark concrete With shiny yellow paint There is no one ...
Dec 14, 2009
