Mirage

Ouch to me... :oops: Well, I found blood-sucking ticks in some of your descriptions as well. Heh, heh, heh... :wink: - Mirage

First Impression: WOW Second Impression: WOW-ER Third Impression: WOWEST!!! I can only wish that I will have your skill some day... :P

Thank you all... but I do think it will be a while until I can revise it. I've sat down several times and stared at it, but nothing comes to ...

Thanks for the tips! I really appreciate the help and I will be sure to revise. I do agree with you on most of the things you said, and I ...

I'm embarassed... :oops:

I loved it! That was a beautiful piece of work, it was grabbing and engrossing. I liked the title choice and I think I have some idea of why you ...