Mirage

Ouch to me... :oops: Well, I found blood-sucking ticks in some of your descriptions as well. Heh, heh, heh... :wink: - Mirage

It's been a looooooooooong time since anyone replied to this... but I felt the need to look at such and accomplished poet's first bit of posted work. When Noxious says, ...

First Impression: WOW Second Impression: WOW-ER Third Impression: WOWEST!!! I can only wish that I will have your skill some day... :P

Thank you all... but I do think it will be a while until I can revise it. I've sat down several times and stared at it, but nothing comes to ...

Well, well, well! Rhyming is not so childish after all! I loved the descriptions in this poem and I almost felt like I was there. Please tell me you wrote ...

Thanks for the tips! I really appreciate the help and I will be sure to revise. I do agree with you on most of the things you said, and I ...

yeah... i believe her and all... but good point sureal!

I started out writing this in the shade of a tree, but I became so inspired that I finished it in the tree rather than beneath it! This is the ...

Because I originally told people I was 13... I was afraid something bad would happen because I made an account as a 13 year old because I didn't want to ...

Good. :smt023

The first time I ever had sashimi, my brother and my sister (there's a 9 and 11 year age difference) told my to try a little bit of the wasabi. ...

Yeah, it's hard to get "awesomer" than that... :P

Good point... My bad! I'm a liar and I am sorry. Better?

I lied... I'm not 13 years old, I'm only 11. I guess it's not that bad, I just figured you all should know the truth. :oops:

Hi... I pulled this off the internet! I hope you all like it... :D