Mira

Banned for threatening to smite people in your avi.

I got a 94. So, I hope to see you all on the "Oldies Writing Society." :P

Mira stared out at the small group, her eyes wide. How were they so close? She had thought that when Lil Sis had gone through the portal that she would ...

Hiyas, Felix! :) I have to say, I quite enjoyed this. It was interesting and I'm eager to see more of how the story is going to play out. There ...

Hiyas! :) First of all, I really loved this piece. It has a great meaning, a wonderful insight at the flaws of the narrator. The final great defect in me, ...

Now listen girls and boys... Pfefferminz I don't know how to pronounce you These three lines are a bit confusing because of the first sentence. You tell the "girls and ...

I don't critique poetry that often, but I hope this is helpful. ;) I really loved this poem. It made me think of my graduation this year and the fun ...

~Work harder ~Rewrite the Gatekeeper to the best of my ability ~Make people I know smile! :D ~Be less clumsy! (Though this is unlikely to happen)

So many people have made wonderful points. ^-^ However, I hope you don't mind if I add a bit to the discussion. ;) Firstly, I think no more than two ...

Hi Janine! It's wonderful meeting you! :D Welcome to YWS. I hope you're enjoying your time here already. ;) I don't hate school, believe me, but it's really nice to ...

Hiyas, Lsph! It's wonderful to meet you! *hands a cookie* Why don't you snack on that why we talk? ;) Writers, I usually write adventerous stories with a touch of ...

Luc! I've talked to you in chat, but I haven't had the chance to welcome you here yet. :O So, welcome! And that problem is now fixed. I hope you're ...

Hiyas, Rebel! :D It's very nice to meet you! I've heard the Vampire Academy series was pretty good. Would you recommend it? And would this - If you have snow ...

Fox, this was a wonderful piece. :) I enjoyed reading it very much. But, on to the review. ;) My changes will be in bold, unless otherwise noted. It was ...

I hope everyone had an amazing Christmas! :D This was incredibly fun, and I hope you all enjoyed it! Let's aim to do this again next year. ;) ~Mira