Mintchocolateleaves

This chapter was amazing! You added enough suspense during the chapter to make me want to keep reading, and you've left the chapter on a cliff hanger to leave me ...

This was truly and amazing first chapter. The way you write from Liamm's perspective, in such a factual way made me want to try and get to know his character ...

I really think this shows potential. I didn't spot any spelling mistakes or mistakes with grammar. The prologue itself leaves so much potential for future chapters, and this is very ...