Miniauthor

Thanks for the comments, I'll try to revise it as soon as I had time. Just so you know, I realize that the big block of description that had the ...

First off, nice job! It was great that you added a little humor while at the same time being kind of dark and mysterious. I was only able to catch ...

I just want to let you know, feel free to critique your heart out on this story. Seriously, rip it to shreds if you want, chew it up and spit ...