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Re: Boys wearing trousers around ankles or bums
Did you know that police actually encourage sagging? It makes all the "gangsta's" that vandalize easier to catch because they can't run very fast with their pants getting in the ...
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: The Never Ending Story...
... illegally smuggled birthday cards into...
Aug 2, 2009 -
Re: The Kingdom of Whym
First off, nice job! It was great that you added a little humor while at the same time being kind of dark and mysterious. I was only able to catch ...
Aug 1, 2009 -
Re: The Kingdom of Whym
That was really good! I loved the description of the characters and the setting, you seem to know a lot about medieval times. I just have a few things I ...
Aug 1, 2009 -
Re: Helloooo peoples!
Hi, thanks for the greeting and wanting to know more about me! Hm... tricky questions though. :D Let's see... music-wise, I listen mostly to christian soft rock (ever heard of ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: The Never Ending Story...
...toothfairy, who was hiding in...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: .:Dream Catcher:. [preface]
This was really great! The parts about the game of life really made me think, and it made me sort of connect with the character somehow, though I'm not sure ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: Helloooo peoples!
Well thanks for sayin' hi! Hm, a bit more about myself? I love the *sucks in deep breath* Maximum Ride, Septimus Heap, Harry Potter, Inkheart, Edge, Bartimaeus, Overland, aaaaand Eragon ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: Black and White (prologue) {slightly revised}
I just want to let you know, feel free to critique your heart out on this story. Seriously, rip it to shreds if you want, chew it up and spit ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: Black and White (prologue) {slightly revised}
Just a forenote, the title or the story isn't meant to be racial!!! It was just pointed out to me that it could be taken the wrong way so please ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: "Escape from Loredaen Hall" chap. 1: The Letter
Pretty much my only critiques are: One, everything sounds very... I guess kind of matter-of-fact. It was very just mellow and 'oh, this person did this and this other person ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: Dreams of Giants
First off, that was really good, it really got my attention and kept me reading. Now to the critiques... I thought it moved a little too fast, you could have ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: Helloooo peoples!
Hey everybody! I'm Miniauthor, and I just wanted to introduce myself since I'm new here, and everyone keeps recommending for me to do this. So! Just a bit about me: ...
Jul 31, 2009
