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Hi there Greenwitch! Okey dokey, well I thought the story idea was really great. The beginning sentence was awesome, as soon as I read it I was like glued to ...

Hey, everybody!!! Just so you know this is the very first draft, no one but myself has edited yet so it might not be very good. I'm still working out ...

Mmmkay, first off I just wanted to say that that you have an awesome story idea here, and great writing style. I just have a few nitpicks to share. :) ...

Hey, first of all you have really good writing style. The beginning was very good, since it had just a touch of sarcastic humor in it (the best kind of ...

You say 'random' I say 'banana nut muffins'.

8/10 Nice, Disney rocks!!! :D

First off, I just have to say "AWWWWWW!!!!!" That is so incredibly nice of you!!! :D I hope your friend is feeling happier now! Anyway, down to business. 8) I ...

Wow. *stares dumbly*. Wow. It sounded very old-fashioned, which I'm sure you were aiming for, so good job with that. But... I don't know, I think you went a little ...

Here's the next part to my story. Hope you like it! Please Crit. (oh, and keep in mind that this was written extremely hastily... heh.) :lol: Chapter Four I woke ...

Hey, nice work! Sorry if some stuff is explained earlier that I mention, but I haven't read part A or B. First off, you need quotes for dialogue. I couldn't ...

Let's see, a random fact.... I got stung by a jellyfish last year at Virginia beach. Umm... I also used to refuse to eat carrots unless they were dipped in ...

Just so you know, I wrote like five chapters of this in one day, so it's probably pretty bad. Please pick it apart as much as you want! :D Chapter ...

Just so you know, you may want to read the prologue first for it to make sense. Please critique harshly! :D And without further ado, here it is! Chapter One: ...

Thanks for the comments, I'll try to revise it as soon as I had time. Just so you know, I realize that the big block of description that had the ...

1)Which side of your jaw do you chew on? left side 2)Can you write with both hands(ambidextrous),or..are you just plain lefty or righty? righty 3)Do you know anyone with photographic ...