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Re: Demon Princess Lilith
Hi there Greenwitch! Okey dokey, well I thought the story idea was really great. The beginning sentence was awesome, as soon as I read it I was like glued to ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Unseen [Prologue-Chapter 1]
Hey, everybody!!! Just so you know this is the very first draft, no one but myself has edited yet so it might not be very good. I'm still working out ...
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: [Empyrosis] Chapter One (edited!)
Mmmkay, first off I just wanted to say that that you have an awesome story idea here, and great writing style. I just have a few nitpicks to share. :) ...
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: That awkward moment just before you go into a magic world.
Hey, first of all you have really good writing style. The beginning was very good, since it had just a touch of sarcastic humor in it (the best kind of ...
Jun 12, 2010 -
Re: I say 'pickle' you think 'pie'
You say 'random' I say 'banana nut muffins'.
Sep 10, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
8/10 Nice, Disney rocks!!! :D
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: The Bolder's Bond
First off, I just have to say "AWWWWWW!!!!!" That is so incredibly nice of you!!! :D I hope your friend is feeling happier now! Anyway, down to business. 8) I ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
Wow. *stares dumbly*. Wow. It sounded very old-fashioned, which I'm sure you were aiming for, so good job with that. But... I don't know, I think you went a little ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: The Silent Queen: Chapter 4-5
Here's the next part to my story. Hope you like it! Please Crit. (oh, and keep in mind that this was written extremely hastily... heh.) :lol: Chapter Four I woke ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: part c of the mage of dragons
Hey, nice work! Sorry if some stuff is explained earlier that I mention, but I haven't read part A or B. First off, you need quotes for dialogue. I couldn't ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: A random fact about yourself
Let's see, a random fact.... I got stung by a jellyfish last year at Virginia beach. Umm... I also used to refuse to eat carrots unless they were dipped in ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: The Silent Queen: Chapter 1-3
Just so you know, I wrote like five chapters of this in one day, so it's probably pretty bad. Please pick it apart as much as you want! :D Chapter ...
Sep 4, 2009 -
Re: Black and White: Chapter One
Just so you know, you may want to read the prologue first for it to make sense. Please critique harshly! :D And without further ado, here it is! Chapter One: ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Black and White (prologue) {slightly revised}
Thanks for the comments, I'll try to revise it as soon as I had time. Just so you know, I realize that the big block of description that had the ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: Some strange questions
1)Which side of your jaw do you chew on? left side 2)Can you write with both hands(ambidextrous),or..are you just plain lefty or righty? righty 3)Do you know anyone with photographic ...
Aug 2, 2009