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Re: The Policeman's Daughter
This is a really interesting story. I was interested by the title, and I'm impressed! :) There were a few mistakes, but these are easily rectified: My mother died from ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: Girlfriends and boyfriends at the age of 10 - 15
I'm a bit unsure about this, because most people in my year (except me) have had boyfriends/girlfriends. I think it depends on the person, as some people can make a ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: Jacob Black's War with a Mozzie
This. Is. Amazingly. Awesome :') Wow! Imaginative doesn't describe it! How did you come up with this idea? It's hilarious but so good :)
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: Drawing of Alice Cullen/Ashley Greene
Thanks for all the reviews! I am going to attempt the other Cullens and other Twilight characters soon, but for some reason I do struggle drawing men?! Weird I know, ...
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: A Love Story in Volterra
Thanks Anna ^^ I wrote this ages ago, I did improve it as best I could (my grammar would terrible, and some of it was just bad :P ) but ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Drawing of Alice Cullen/Ashley Greene
Tinkembell: Thanks for the advice! :) I just want to let you know that as the films have gone on, the less spiky her hair has been. XD This is ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: A Love Story in Volterra
"Come on, Alice," my sister Cynthia moaned. I was gazing at a beautiful dress in the window of a small shop in Volterra. I loved shopping, and I had fallen ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Drawing of Alice Cullen/Ashley Greene
Thanks for the comments! :) GeeLyria: I just got the picture I was drawing and made it huge, then I can concentrate on the shading of everything :)
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Thinking of You
Hey! :) I really liked this. Tangled is an awesome film, and I think this was a great fanfiction in relation to it. I would suggest that you split the ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Unspoken
Hey! I'm Holly (: This is my first review, and I hope it helps you! I think this is an interesting story, and I like the concept, but there is ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hey! :) I'm Holly, I'm 15 and I'm from England! :) I LOVE Twilight and NCIS...and I want to start writing some vampire or crime stories of my own. All ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Drawing of Alice Cullen/Ashley Greene
Hey! Well this is my first work that I've uploaded here, so I'm a bit nervous :P I LOVE Twilight. A lot. Especially Alice Cullen. So I drew her! :) ...
Nov 15, 2011
