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Re: The First Marks
POSITIVE: It has a great message NEGATIVE: I'm sure you meant to deliver a wonderful message to all those who will read this but the way you gave that message...doesn't ...
Oct 30, 2012 -
Re: Prince Edward Island
POSITIVE: Nice poem, indeed. I could actually imagine the whole scene. NEGATIVE: You've got a way with words, but sometimes, that isn't a good thing. Too many words (or in ...
Oct 30, 2012 -
Re: I Shall Not Hear The Crow Sing
POSITIVE: I love how it's seems deep and the word play is excellent! NEGATIVE: I know your trying to hit the "I'm miserable" point or the "I feel alone/ empty" ...
Oct 30, 2012 -
Re: .
POSITIVE: It's nice how you made a nursery rhyme entertaining for other ages. NEGATIVE: However, I think you need to extend this a bit more. It sort of leaves the ...
Oct 30, 2012