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Payback for reviewing my story. bold is my reviews and comments. “There girl, hold still, I’m almost done.” I hit the bolt with my hammer, fitting it smoothly with the ...

This was very confusing. The corrections will be in bold. I’m Dragon, and my true adventure started when I was about eighteen. I befriended a girl, and she persuaded me ...

in this form, it's really hard for me to read. Pm me if you can fix it up. Several times where emerald spoke it wasn't in quotations. It was good ...

Thanks Reuben a ! I fixed the mistakes. thanks for commenting!

That's really good! Your a very talented writer!

That's really good! Your a very talented writer!

aww.... I just found out I need points... =(

I really want to make a story book, can I?

Sorry, meh too. School is harder this year than last. =( . SORRY!!!!! *cries*

Sorry allmixedup! I had a different thought of him! Sorry for the confusion!!!!!!! Cleo "Sure is." Ribbon murmured.Once we finished, Kai almost dragged us back to camp. Ribbon strode off ...

Cleo I smiled at Ribbon as we filled our casks. "We should duel more often. You're good." I stated. She shrugged. "When I was with my old master," I began, ...

Wait... it's my profile OMG!!! The forum spit it out *dances around happily* . Use the other one, though!

Is this still alive anymore?

ya, guess ur right.

With mine and the enemy's sowrd in both hands, I raced head on into the new wave of enemy recruits. I barely glimpsed another one or two of our dolls ...