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bold is my comments. The man blowing his nose was like a fog horn, shattering the early morning fog in the doctor's office. His hands trembled and his movements jerked, ...

Sebastion bump. "Who is going to find her again?" I asked Donia. "Not now Sebastion. It's sort of private." I nodded at Donia's response as a cackly message same over ...

Numare "Late again, Mike?" I asked the sleepy man as he introduced himself to Saphire. "What's going on here?" He asked. "We're planning for a -" I began. "Let me ...

Killer Snapped and barked at the intruder, in a my-territory-don't-see-my-mates sort of thing. How Tommi taught me to. I got a bite in her leg before hid could back off, ...

Alright! Well, bold are comments and suggestions. I was at school when it happened. The event that caused the inevitable to happen. A bit better hook, I think. They said ...

ok, im changing it a bit- is it ok? Name: Lori Age: 16 Gender:female Appearance: Personality: Lori is very friendly and bubbly. She won't hesitate to help, and it's that ...

Numare "Almost perfect." I admittd. "You have anything else?" She asked. "Well, we should get the animals to foul the water, mold the food. get wolves to howl, don't let ...

Numare "Morgan, Frizzie, Riverton, go see if you can find the men." I told them. Morgan nickered to her foal. "No, i'll keep him here to be safe. I won't ...

Sebastion "Hello." I said to the man who jut arrived. "Not now." He replied. "Well, then." I muttered. I saw a girl running. "Excuse me..." I murmured to Donica, who ...

Ack you didn't leave me with much! The next day was rather uneventful compared to the day before. I was a bit envious of Iva, for all of the elves ...

Caroline *stabs self with a O.o face* What if you had to read a 500 page novel by tomorrow if you wanted to live?

Killer I looked up at Tommi, my wonderful master as she watched the girl. I huffed and growled menacingly at man-who-tries-to-take-me. Then at the lost girl. Tommi scratched my chin. ...

I like it! But, it has to go more in depth to give an accurate critique. Post more soon! And btw, your allowed if you want. You can. I've never ...

Alright, I had this idea last night: two poems, different but related to one another. They're dramatic poems, so I put them here. Here they are! Eventually, I am going ...

I'm not a very good poet, but I get strange blurts at night and I have to write a poem. Every step makes the drums beat faster. every step keeps ...