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Re: Story From a Pit Bulls Eyes
That's really good! Amazing! The only thing, is I would check fro capital I (eye, not l as in letter) s. Good poem!
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: RPG: All The Pretty Faces
Sure! 'Issy' Isabel March I watched Gwen enviously as she 'snogged' with Holden. I smirked at her, glancing at the clock. It was about eight. Ugh, class soon. "I got ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Kissing under twilight
I'm here to critique! Your blue eyes sail on my rocky lips. rocky lips? Watching me as I speak. Dagger words slice my tongue as they leap from my throat, ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Scattered 2
Please make this an SB!!! I hold a spot fro when -i hope it will be- you make it!
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: The Runaways (Accepting Characters)
No magic, or anything? NAME: Tomix Sarraisi GENDER: Male AGE: 17 APPEARANCE: He's about 5'4, not too tall. He has black eyes that look red in the sun. The don't ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: RPG: All The Pretty Faces
That's fine by me.
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Ugly and Beautiful, Terrible and Amazing.
For each stanza but the last, there is a corresponding one. The first and the 18th, second and the 19th, third and 20th, and so on. I'm a leader, but ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Boarding School [2]
Move it! I'm so glad your starting again- I hope. You got so far! You got to keep going!
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: RPG: All The Pretty Faces
Same. So, we start tomorrow?
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: Young Writers Literary Journal 2011
O.o You made my day, Nate!
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: Circus Outcast (Starting, but still accepting!)
Luke "I'm coming, I'm coming!" K.J yelled, morphing from his dragon form back into a human. I barely noticed when ember grasped my hand, but I did when she practically ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: Circus Outcast (Starting, but still accepting!)
Luke "I'm coming, I'm coming!" K.J yelled, morphing from his dragon form back into a human. I barely noticed when ember grasped my hand, but I did when she practically ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: Circus Outcast (Starting, but still accepting!)
Luke "I'm coming, I'm coming!" K.J yelled, morphing from his dragon form back into a human. I barely noticed when ember grasped my hand, but I did when she practically ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: Circus Outcast (Starting, but still accepting!)
Luke "I'm coming, I'm coming!" K.J yelled, morphing from his dragon form back into a human. I barely noticed when ember grasped my hand, but I did when she practically ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: Don't Blame Anyone
Don't hurt the dead man, it really wasn't his fault. Don't mourn the dead king, he was too young anyways. Don't kill the living children, they didn't choose to be ...
Nov 12, 2010