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Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death
This is so good! I like how you gave Death a more cheery tone. As if he's tired of all us stinkin humans. Well, this was really hilarious. Keep up ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: 0.
This is pretty good, but sort of confusing. You use words my poor brain fails to comprehend. Why are you so smart? :D Anyways, I really liked this. I can't ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Grace
Hm. Now I'm going to go read the novella! I'm puzzled whether I like this or not- I'm sort of on the bubble. Let's see how this plays out. Bold= ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: First Love
If I were you, I'd break it up into a ballad. It's a bit hard to read, but never the less I will review this fine poem. First Love By: ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: A dream
This has a bunch of potential, Annabella. I actually think this is well written, though I think it could be better in a poem. These are all things I would ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Carnation Milk
Erm, this is... odd. Maybe not good odd, either. I didn't particularly like this, especially of the language it used. Let's see if we can child-proof this. Carnation milk is ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: The cave neer the baseball feild.
Chapter 1 " d D o you hear that , Ben? " Maggie asks. " Hear what?" He replies. Maggie struggled to get up from her seat to show her ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Extinction
Hopefully no more. *sharpens knife and stares at FF*
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Camp Half-Blood *Join!*
Any way I can bring Arya into this? Sorta lost touch... Maybe I can make a late-arriving camper? :?
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Extinction
Name: Clyde Littleton Age: 16 History: She grew up in a rich but broken home. Her parents were never home. The scarce time they were home at the same time, ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: What would happen if?
Lucas "I am B.L.O.M.P. I do not come in peace." The alien thing growled. He was a pale pink with long, golden hair. Not that it was long enough to ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Questions Game
Because you're simply not a deep, meaningful person. Why do humans hate me?
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish [3]
Granted; it was renamed to hatred. I wish that there was a wish that no one could corrupt, not even Snoink.
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Academy for Young Demons (Dead | Full)
Fox Oh, dear I'm late. So sorry, Riro! I gasped. Adventures? No. I do not do the whole adventure thing. Oh, look at me, I'm shaking and- "Fox, calm down!" ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: So I'm being a bit lazy...
Yea, the review for food topic (which Sylvester has said) is exactly what you're advertising. I'd suggest asking a mod to move it there.
Mar 27, 2011
