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Ok. I'm thinking of splitting it into chapters so I can differentiate. Any other tips?

Best book is shades of grey by jasper fforde. Although unfortunately named, it is a very thoughtful dystopian future book.

Sorry it's been a while but one more question for you two. Should I switch the povs between the two characters? It's hard to see any character development in George ...

Thank you! I might try incorporating this into the idea that @JohnLocke1 gave me! Although, this is my first big short story so it could be a challenge. Of course ...

Thank you so much! Do you mind if I use that idea? I just feel it's too good to pass up and I feel as if I could definitely go ...

Hi! I wrote a story for English, but felt like there was so much more I could do with it. The problem is, I'm a bit stuck at a certain ...