MilaScribbler

New story hope u guys like it XD THE POWER OF THE ELEMENTS Chapter One “Look everyone!” Chelsea said loudly, making everyone turn around to hear what Ms. Oh-so-perfect had ...

1 uploaded the 1st 2 chapters but i have to work on those. This is the prologue (hence the title javascript:emoticon(':P')) anyway pls comment Prologue 1450 B.C Thunder clashed in ...

Hey! well i think its quite good but i suggest you change the title... i dont really see much connection... no offense but its just as KnightlyAngel09 said... Other than ...

Hey! -I think its really good... -what i'm not really sure of is whether this is happening in modern life or way back in time. The fact that Clover was ...

If you didn't read chapter 1 I suggest you do so.... Ok that sounded cheeky... :wink: what I mean is you'll get the story better... please review... i know this ...

I agree with all break-my-heart said... If you arrange a few spelling mistakes and correct your few flaws it would bring the poem to a higher level other than that ...

I think it was a pretty good poem on the whole what u might want to arrange are the long sentences that sometimes make the reader think its a piece ...

This is my first poem: i wrote it about 2 minutes ago and I thought I should post it...We talked about Abortion during PSD today and it got me thinking. ...

Yo! My friend mimimac suggested this preview so thought I would give it a shot.... Okay so i know that since u edited it so many times this may sound ...

What the book is about: Mila and her friends: Zoë, Phoebe and Pat win a school competition about Greece and its culture. They win a prize: a cruise to the ...