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It immediately reminded of Hemingway's shortest novel ever written. "For sale. Baby shoes. Never worn." And the reason why I it came to my mind, is because it is not ...

The waiting aspect is extremely relatable to me, and it is great that you decided to tackle this subject. I had problems when an important person would not call back ...

I imagine you got the idea after you discovered the quote, correct me if my assumption is wrong. The quotes itself is very powerful and (if looked at from right ...

Your opening chapter Is remarkably fast and short. It is very straightforward, narrator tells me just what I need to know, nothing more nothing less. You handled what little of ...

I love meaningless violence. It is stupid, fun and really entertaining if done right. You did right thing when you did not push the 'serious' plot aspect, because this story ...