Mikko

:D A South Park Classic! I Love How Kenny Is Always 'Out In The Blue'!

Nice poem! What attracted me were the first and second lines: Cold, I stand alone. Nice work, keep them coming!

I really like this because I like the way it relates to me (and I guess to other people too) and the fact that we all have our comfort zones. ...

I like the way the things you hate rhyme! :) I really like this poem and its simplicity, especially the fact that it relates to most people. It's sort of ...

I agree, don't be nervous because I personally think that all that matters is you loving your work. I have to say that I really liked your work and I ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! I'm sort of new too so I know how it feels to post your first work. I think it's good but maybe you should go over ...

Our fathers' strong friendship caused me to grow up in your house. They were inseparable- they worked together, they always gave each other a hand and shared similar experiences. I ...

The spelling mistakes *check* "I.LOVE.IT" *check* "It relates to all who have had crushes" *check* What more is there to say? Oh yes! Keep writing because we (and by 'we' ...

I love this! It sound like it's coming from experience (am I wrong?). Anyway what I love most about it is the reality in it--how much truth there is in ...

Nice poem. I agree that it is all stuck in one lump and that separating it into stanzas would make it more interesting. My favourite line is Never caring, ever ...

I really like this poem. I especially like the repetition of "Perhaps" as it shows the person's uncertainty and how he/she tries to persuade yet dissuade themselves. Nice work!

Wow! I love it, it made me laugh at some parts and I like the tempting cliffhanger. I also like the fact that you saw from a teenage boy's point ...

Thank you! It's my first time on this site and I just had to write a little something as an opening to this new site. So thank you for your ...

There hadn't been a storm. No thunder or lightning. No wild sea. Nothing. The sea was so calm as no wind was blowing over it, not even the slightest breeze ...