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Re: The Sun.
And again! Another weather poem! I hope you enjoy it! 8) Sun, Sun, Oh golden Sun! You watch us all day, And hear what we say. Sun, Sun, Oh golden ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: The Snow.
This is weird. The first poem that I posted was called The Rain. And now I'm writing about The Snow. No, it is not an obssession with weather, it's just ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: I'm All Your Living For
Even if this is a topic written on often, I like it and love the way it's written. My favourite stanza is : 'Cause there will never be an “Us”, ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: By Day's End.
I think you shouldn't just leave it like that, you should carry on! It's good (for something done in 45 mins :P). But seriously, you should carry on. By the ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: Christmas
A nice and simple poem that reminds us of the joys and splendours of our (my) favourite time of the year! :) I like it!
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: Never Loved
So first of all, welcome to YWS. Your poem is nice as many people have had this experience of not knowing love. I just though that there were a few ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets -- Chapter 3 [Sunshine]
I am officially ADDICTED to your novel! Just after watching your trailer, you've got me hooked on you novel! I am loving it! I want more!!!
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets Book Trailer *NEW with screenshots*
Oh my goodness! A trailer for a novel? It's REALLY good; not just the trailor, but the plot of your story, it really made me want to read it. You ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: Love, be home for Christmas
I really like this poem because it sounds cute and like a traditional Christmas poem where girls wait for their lovers to return for the festive periods. I like it ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: The Love flu
I like the idea, I find the poem nice. But I just don't understand the rhyming pattern. The first stanza goes abbc the second goes aaaa the third goes aabb ...
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: Lilly Evans' diary 5
You're amazing! If J.K. Rowling knew what you were doing to her characters she would love you too! Keep writing more of these I want to know what happents next, ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Lilly Evans' diary 3
I love these diary entries! You are most definately a fan! (Like me!!) And I am loving it because it gives us a better idea on the pre-Harry Potter Lily ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Lilly Evans' diary 2
Yes! We're just following the series! I love it!!!
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Lilly evans' diary
Wow! I love this! Especially how you portray Lily and Petunia as little girls before they came into contact with the real magical world!
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: The Rain.
I'm REALLY excited! It's the first poem that I'm posting here! I have loads. Here it goes... Here the droplets come again, Bringing down a glorious rain, Every single one ...
Dec 17, 2010
