Mikko

It's good, I don't know why you're disappointed with it. I only have two things to correct: Tears of joy or t ears of sorrow? I was not sure. There, ...

Wow! I like your poem! The only thing I have to say is that 'weeps' and 'cease' do not rhyme. Keep 'em coming! :)

I really like rewritten classics, and I enjoy reading yours! I think the beginning ressembles 'Cinderella' though, but it's O.K. I have only one problem apart from that it's: It’s ...

Ok so I've been working on this new novel though I haven't yet finished my first one: 'Ship-wrecked' (check it out!!!) This one is different in style and you'll have ...

Arrgh! I've reviewed this twice already but I keep losing it! I’ve been busy with exam revision too. Anyway, I'll try again hoping I won't lose it this time! Comments ...

I like your haikus! Especially that they're about nature. I try to write my poems on the same topic because I find it different. Nice work! Keep 'em coming! :)

Is this the summer before 5th year? OK, once again, Lily has to tell the reader why she's jumped from 3rd year to the end of 4th... I love the ...

I have to say that I TOTALLY agree with seeminglymeaningless : Your work needs a lot of grammatical changes! (Sorry). When I read your post about what the story was ...

I had a writer's block for the past week :? and made up for that by writing poems ( The Rain, The Snow and The Sun ). Now I'm back ...

Nice poem! It comes from the heart and I hope this friend of your's has read this and seen how much she means to you! Keep writing! :)

You were right to not give this a particular subject, or to tell the reader what it is about because that is the art in it. I really like this ...

Ooh! I see Lily is starting to get the "Teenage Bug"! Just like Hermoine in book 3 :) Ok, so she hasn't written for about two years and I think ...

Oh my gosh! I am liking your parody! You should make a video! xD! I like the fact that you got your funny inspiration from food :D . Keep 'em ...

I find this beautiful, especially as it is related to religion. I love your idea of the refrain and find it very meaningful especially as it is repeated. I am ...

Thank you for your reviews, guys! I put the corrections in bold.