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Re: Red-Striped Replacement
I didn't really understand this poem either. But hey, that's the magic of a poet: one doesn't always find the meanings of a poet's poem. Let me tell you what ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Boogie Man
Hey! I liked your poem! Very creepy, so effective. Ok, so when you started using "Boogie Man, Boogie Man" as the first line of the first two stanzas, I felt ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Worship Thy Beaver
Nice poem! I have these comments (in blue): Norbert; like diamonds, is forever. He is all I need to please me. He can stimulate and tease me. He won't leave ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Silent Song (My graphic novel) <<Updated>>
*Claps excitedly* Oh my gosh! I am officially a fan of your graphic novel! How did you manage to get to draw the wolves like that? I love the toning, ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Help! Help! Help! (Not really)
I definately like what you did with this poem! Especially because it actually made me smile (when I'm not really in a smiling mood...). But bears eat dears? Hit me ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Our wild Night
Oh! I liked the 'unexpected' part at the end. I agree with the above comments (grammar, spelling and lack of imagery/emotions). It's not bad, just not so special. However I ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Children of the Sea
Hey! This is a really nice poem, I have to say, and I believe that your family were not just obliged to say they liked it because I agree with ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: When I was young
Hey! I like you poem! Short and simple but the rhyme makes it cute and reminds the reader that it's about when you were young. Apart from that, I don't ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Review Day Check-In Thread
I'm really busy with homework and such, but I've managed to do two reviews. Why not three more? Or four even? I'll see what I can do :) Woo! Totally ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Highway
It's a good thing you didn't manage to make those three words come together with the rest of the poem because I like this structure. It somehow add effect to ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Random Thoughts
Hey skermitz! I enjoyed reading your poem, it made me feel like dreaming away like you! xD Anyway, I like the ryming pattern and the flow of your poem and ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Unlocked at last
I love your poem Beebee! I like your style of poetry. Keep them coming! :)
Jan 28, 2011 -
Re: From where the student sits.
I like your poem because I am also familiar with the same scenarios eveyday! Nothing much to say, only try capitalising-- A s the lockers. That are now a corroded ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
*Raises hand and jumps up and down* Oooh me me me! LOL I know you're busy :wink: but could you review chapter 3 of Ship-wrecked? Yay! I knew you would ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Cartora (Chapter 3)
Fianally back with Cartora!This chapter took me a while ot think up and I got other ideas for other stories AND I've been a bit busy. It's quite short I ...
Jan 23, 2011
