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Re: Somewhere Over The Rooftop.
I really like this poem! No, seriously, I mean really like it because it's touching. Maybe because I've had to take this decision a few times so I know how ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: Opal' (Chapters 1&2)
Chapter 1 I sat at my dressing table, already pampered with make-up and my hair had been held up in a high coiffure. My dress was of a cream colour ...
Mar 3, 2011 -
Re: As if I Never Existed
I love your poem! I really felt the emotion. I like rhyme but there are two words that I don't think really rhyme: "sharp" and "heart". But that's ok Keep ...
Mar 3, 2011 -
Re: Love Suite
Hey! I’m going to do a full review on you story. Don’t worry, I’ll be nice! I definitely like your story! And take it as a compliment from someone who ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: My Home
Wow! I see someone's inspired today...unlike me. Anyway, yes, the poem is sweet. I like the line: Reminiscing of who I’m missing because of the rhyme in one line and ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: My Day Dreams
I really like your poem. I like the rhyme and the repetition of "Oh". Now I know that I am not the only math-class day dreamer! Keep these lovely little ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: Sam I Am (Prologue)
Thanks! And actually, I've grown to not like it quite so much so I decided to give it up as a whole.
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: Opal' (Prologue)
Opal I would like to delete two other stories that I'm writing and really concentrate on this one and on Cartora because I really like the idea and I'd really ...
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: This Isn't Me--Part One
Adam Young! Yeah Owl City! Anyway... It's not bad, but it was very rushed! If you took some time to really explain some things like Joe's features, how Nick felt ...
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: The Unnamed One-First
I like this and I really want to read what will happen next. Ok, the little mistakes that I noticed have already been reviewed, so I'm not really needed here. ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Some of my Photos
I really like your photos! I especially love the first one! Keep them coming! :)
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: Cartora (chapter 4)
So...It's been a while we haven't seen what Luna has been up to, but here she is again in this last chapter of the first part of my novel. The ...
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: A Futurama Fan-Art (Fry+Leela)
Woohoo! A futurama fan! I love this! You have got one good memory to have drawn this without having it infront of you! :D Impressed!
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Sam I Am (Prologue)
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Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: A Scent-iment on a One Night Stand
I really like your poem espacially its simplicity and the repetition of lines. I love the last stanza! Your poem is really nice and I hope to read many of ...
Jan 30, 2011
