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Re: I'm Over Here!
Hey! Could you review my poems titled under "Romance" in Lyric poetry, please? Thanks :) Mikko'.
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Foolish Wisdom
This is a really nice poem, though I haven't got one idea but many going through my head. It's so paradoxial (I love that!!), thus I must say that you ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Still Me
I like this, especially the first two stanzas. The last one seems...off. Simply. I, personally, don't have any problem with "ain't". It's original (if I can say that), it brings ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: At Cambridge.
I enjoyed your poem and I like the structure of your stanzas. The little problem I had has been dealt with already by Poem. Funny enough, I have a similar ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Romance...
These are two love poems (if you can call them that) that I just wrote out of pure imagination. I wasn't thinking about anyone in particular, I just wrote. I'd ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Listening to a Friend (Getting Over It)
Do you seriously hate your dad? Because I'm really feeling your emotions through this poem. I love your poetry: you always make me feel it...it's like magic. Ok, that's weird ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Time Goes By...
Time goes by... My mother took me When I was two, To my very first day Of a life so new. Different to my home Where I used to play, ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: The Teenage Me
The ghost of my childhood Came to meet me last night, She said that I'd changed- No longer the girl she used to know. She danced and laughed and sang, ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: The Bench
The Bench I’ve written short sketches. These are the first 5 episodes (if you can call them episodes). Contains bad language but it’s censored. I hope you like it because ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: I pity You
Mwahaha! You want me to be harsh? Pff, I have nothing harsh to say only that you should try seperating your poem in stanzas. But I think it adds effects ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Tea Time
I really like this poem and its touch of sarcasm! It's simple and has a nice rhyming pattern. Nice work. Keep 'em coming!
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Blinded
Let me take an unimaginative guess: it's about this person who is different compared to those around her. Probably about a person with low self-esteem because of her surrounding society. ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death
This is a great piece! The way I picture Death is like Hades in Hercules (the Disney version...) how he talks so fast with an unintentional touch of humour. I ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Counting the Stars
This really is a beautiful poem! I especially like this stanza: What will I wish for? I haven’t got a clue but when it comes down to it I think ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: The Mountains
Well, I'm not such an expert in photography but I really like these photos! I especially love one of the stream and the one of the reflection. Beautiful. Keep 'em ...
Mar 9, 2011
