Mikko

I love the tone of this poem: it's really cold and...cold. (Excuse me for my lack of words right now.) I like the rhyming scheme and the two couplets. A ...

Well, I liked what you tried to do with this poem. The slang makes it original though we should show that you did it on purpose by putting apostrophes like ...

I've been writing quite alot of poetry these days, I guess the emotions are there. My last one was "I cut myself" Yeah I just realised that it was strange ...

I like this. Though I also disagree with the point because since it hurts so much, at one point you won't even feel the pain anymore so in that case ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! First of all, to avoid the warning thing you could just rate this. I think 16 or 18+ would be fine because theres sex and bad ...

I cut myself *Edited after rememberme's review* Why I did it? I do not know. Must have been a curiosity overflow, For all I wanted was to feel The knife’s ...

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I don't really know what to say about this poem. It just sort of came to me...suddenly. I didn't look at it twice. I just wrote. And I liked it. ...

This is truly beautiful, though you're right: it is a little corny and there are some clichés but it's still very sweet. You need only to touch up on some ...

Yes, I can definately relate! My favorite line is: And leave me with a forced rhyme because it's so true that when writer's block hits you, this is the typical ...

This is a lovely little poem. My favorite line is: For I once loved you, Dani D It was a really nice way to end it. I also like the ...

This is so sweet. You wrote this in fifth grade? Well, it's lovely and touching. I hope your friend is restiing in peace up there.

Wow! I can see you really hate this girl. And yeah, expressing it is the best way to get rid of the feeling but wooow! Ok, one thing I really ...

Hi again! I feel really bad that i'm submitting something else and i only really just did. That just shows how inspired you are then. Unlike me right now --' ...

I'm shouting out too!! I've done three so far, but the stats say I've done two. Oh well...(goes back to reviewing...)