Mikko

This is a very powerful poem indeed. Mainly because the message is straight to the point and it's length gives it that strong hold on the reader. It is a ...

Letter to Love. Dear Love, I know it may seem very awkward for me to be writing such a letter to you, but I only wanted to make a few ...

Hah! I loved this! I'm so happy someone go the guts to address Winter like this. It made me laugh especially: Thirdly, I’m not sure if you are aware, but ...

Dear Moon, I’m up bright and early this morning! Yesterday dad told me something. I don’t know if it’s great or if it’s bad but I think it’s a bit ...

I quite like this poem! I liked the message you were trying to bring acroos though I was disappointed when the third stanza did not contain that repeted first line. ...

This is really beautiful! These seem like the day-dreams you get when you're deeply crushing on someone and you can't help yourself but stare at them and imagine all the ...

This is a well written poem! Well done! I like the flow of the lines and the mysterious 'monter' you talk of. There was only one spelling error that I ...

These are really nice! I like #1 and #5 the most. Great job! Where did you take these? The area looks familiar to me...

This piece is yet another start of a new project. It was inspired by the great J.K Rowling and one of our fellow YWSers: Charlii101 . Remember that this is ...

I like what you've done here, with the background thoughts in brackets! I also like the flow of the poem and the rhyme but the first stanza has a different ...

Hey! I really like this poem because I can relate to it. I've been there before and it's true that backstabbing friends can be eye-openers. Where you wrote "guliable" did ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! I like this poem- especially the first stanza that sets a gruesome scene which is just like the life of a soldier. I like the first ...

I love this! Do you want to know a secret? You seriously removed my stress with this poem! The rhythm and rhyme are just so unwinding and kept constant. Nice ...

This has nothing to do with the poem. I’m Torn because I cut myself . Now I live in a… Perfect world. A rainbow in the night’s sky, A smile ...

I really like this. Your grammar is good though I think some of your uses of semi-commas don't seem quite right to me. Anyway, they don't stop your poem from ...