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Re: Answer a question with a question game
How should I know?
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: I miss you
Hey there! This is a cute and simple little poem and you're right that it's not the best poem ever but it's the expression of how/what you feel and I ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Your Paper Beauty
This is a lovely poem and I also enjoyed reading it! It flowed really well and the rhythmn was kept constant. Though you did sneak in a rhyming pattern that ...
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: Electric blue motorbike
Electric blue motorbike Verse 1 Let’s go for a couple of rounds Exceed limits, out of bounds Explore a place we’ve never been to And I’ll be holding onto you ...
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: Newbie... and scared.
Hey there Volfie! Aww, I understand what you feel when you get some harsh criticism, but don't worry! Some people whp review like that only try to help the writer ...
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: Welcome Everyone to the Site... You'll LOVE it!
Hey there! It's nice to know that you're enjoying the site as much as the rest of us! Oh and it's also nice to have people who write about the ...
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: Answer a question with a question game
Who doesn't he distract?
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: The House of Broken Dreams
Spaaaaaaark! This is a beautiful song and it's touching because sometimes I wish I could go back to those times too. I especially love verse 3 and I can shamelessly ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Oil pastel art
Hey there guys! Well this is my first time actually posting my art-work. I did these with some oil pastels. I don't have a scanner so I had to use ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: The Magical Diary of L.L.P--part 8
Sorry if you’ve been waiting! I haven’t been in a story-writing mood lately. School is about to start and things are getting a bit hectic around here so... Yeah, enjoy! ...
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: I'm gonna be alright
Oh my gosh, Mikko! What's it with you and song-writing these days? Oh well. Shut up and let them enjoy the music, well the words...whatever. Yeah. Enjoy! I’m gonna be ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: new
Hey there and welcome to YWS! It's nice to see another new person join our community of writers! I know you'll like it here and meet lots of nice people ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Wish
Wish Verse 1 I wish That life would always be like this I wish That I could have you with me forever I wish That this grass never gets cut ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: Hello :)
Hey there! Welcome to YWS! It's a good thing your friend showed you this site because he/she probably loved it and has every reason to do so! You'll meet some ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Stalker
Stalker Alright you, What do you have with me? Why do you keep following me? Why is it that everywhere I go You’re there? Stop appearing in my way And ...
Aug 30, 2011
